Its a more detailed pitch than most with a standard disclaimer at the end. It has most of the classic phrases you find with MLMs. Forgive me, but to my eyes, it certainly looks like you are trying to make a case for GDI – And judging by your comments about Hard Core Anti-MLM sites, I suspect you must know this is one of them. So I really have to question your motive for the long an detailed post (pitch?). (My comments are in (parenthesis) )
I will cut and paste some parts of your e-mail to illustrate – most of them are classic MLM speak.